My first sojourn into serious writing was while studying for an Open College Network ‘B’ Unit in creative writing. We were very lucky, the final exam was a ‘take home piece’ – we were given a selection of photographs and instructed to write a poem, a short story or a dramatic monologue. I went straight into the library, found a desk and wrote a poem about one photograph. It was a curiosity-type, shop window. I reeled the first draft off in a round an hour and left for home feeling very pleased with myself. Perhaps another hour of refining would secure the exam and I could email it in. That would have been great. Unfortunately, I looked again at the other photographs and when I looked at one in particular my mind began to take over. The image would not leave me alone.
Stripes can be wonderful. I should think of the seaside at Blackpool, of
vivid coloured sticks of rock, striped deckchairs, donkey rides, buckets and
spades. I had that kind of wonderful
childhood. I still live in Blackpool but
at first mention of stripes, the image that stands out for me is of the striped
uniform used to degrade my fellow human beings.
My hope is, that if we always remember those terrible crimes against
humanity that our children and our children’s children will find a way to
understand each other, to accept our differences and to live together live in
peace.
A person
I see your face,
once full of life, now desperation.Eyes deep in fearful sockets,
cheeks tracked by tearful deprivation.
I see your suit,
stained sour with degradation.
Poor poisoned weeds,
browning from their dehydration.
I see your limbs,
protruding from striped humiliation,
camouflaged against your prison bars,
you are translucent in emaciation.
You disappeared inside your cover,
camouflaged against your prison bars,
you are translucent in emaciation.
You disappeared inside your cover,
my brother, sister, friend
and I declare with all I
have that’s human,
this hate must end.
Thanks for reading.
Adele
1 comments:
This is a lovely blog Adele. I wholeheartedly agree with your message. Stripes always make me think of concentration camps too. My grandparents were in one in Germany and stripes were banned in their house. I still don't wear them today.
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