written and posted by members of Lancashire Dead Good Poets' Society

Saturday 25 June 2022

Mermaids

Prologue: I wrote a poem featuring mermaids just six weeks ago for my 'Essence' (water) blog - poor forward planning, I know. I also wrote one back in the earlier days of the Dead Good Blog (linked here: The Poet and the Mermaid). Consequently, for the sake of variety I thought this Saturday I'd go with a piece of flash fiction - though given its setting, it might more appropriately be labelled splash fiction. I hope you'll like it.💧


Featuring: Ocean Stream
Seven years on, several seas later, and here they were on a Sunday morning, face to face again. Well, almost. She couldn't see much of the man behind the glass in the diving-helmet, but she knew it was Buck from his stance.. Who else, forty-five feet deep with umbilical air supply snaking up to his sneaky boat Chasing Tail ? "Don't you try following me neither, Buck Brocket you fucker", she had screamed at him way back in 1934, the night she'd stormed out of their married quarters at the Naval Base in Honolulu. She'd arrived home a day early from visiting her folks to find him in bed with the flirty redhead from the General Store. Of course, he had. Followed her that is. Only not straight away, not while he was naked. "God damn you Mary Lou", (that was her name then). "I love you bitch, get back here", he'd bellowed after his departing wife, while the other woman in his life leaped from the bed, pulled on her clothes and fled. Brocket, riled by the turn of events, poured himself a stiff bourbon and cursed his bad luck. Then he searched for her, and again later that day and the next, and the next week too. Nothing. No word, no trace. His name disgraced.

When she'd walked distraught into the ocean off Waikiki beach, Mary Lou had intended to die, felt so pained she just wanted to end it all, fully expected to drown. Possibly she had. How else to explain her transformation than as some sort of reincarnation? And yet she remembered all of her past life until that moment of immersion. A baptism then? Magical metamorphosis from human being to mermaid. And a new identity as Ocean Stream. None of the mermaid company, her new family of companions, could enlighten her. They too had past lives on dry land which they could recall to greater or lesser degree, but how they made the switch from earthly to sea creatures was a mystery to them all. Still, they were free to swim hither and there as they pleased, seeming never to age, only mindful to steer clear of humankind in their paradise beneath Pacific waves.

A couple of years after Mary Lou had fled, Buck Brocket was sitting in a dentist's waiting room, idly flicking through a back-copy of National Oceanographic, when he came across an article titled 'Mermaids - more than a myth?' purporting to claim that divers looking for sharks off the coast of Necker had picked up on the ship's primitive sonar a cluster of fish that appeared to have extremely elongated front flippers, almost limb-like. None of them had ever seen anything like it before and the thought struck all of them that these were something other than dolphins, porpoises or manatees. They tried to home in on whatever was down there but they were too late and found nothing. However, they had all independently witnessed the phenomenon and they weren't ashamed to say what they thought they'd seen. 

Buck was so galvanised by what he read that he left the dentist's surgery without waiting for his appointment. "Mr Brocket? Mr Brocket?" Of course he took the magazine with him and pored over the article several times more in the days following until he'd convinced himself that Mary Lou was out there somewhere in those waters round the islands. Whether he was looking for reconciliation or retribution he wasn't sure, but he was going to find her first and figure the rest out later. He enrolled at diving school and got trained. He bought all the gear and a boat. He acquired an assistant, called his company Brocket Brothers (there was no brother but it sounded better) and began hiring himself out on diving operations to earn a living and subsidise his search. For five years he'd been working all over the world, dividing his time between client work and dives in search of Mary Lou. It had become a seemingly hopeless compulsion, this search, and yet suddenly here he was standing not six feet away from his wife-turned-mermaid while she floated in front of him like a vision, at the bottom of Pearl Harbour. He laughed to himself at the irony of searching the sea-beds of every ocean only to find her not five miles from where he'd lost her, but anger born of wounded pride soon asserted itself as he remembered how he'd felt the day she'd run out on him. "Found you, bitch", he said as he reached out to grab her. She couldn't hear what he said, of course, but she instinctively manoeuvred out of range.

Then as they stared in surprise at each other, he began to contemplate the fame and fortune he might accrue if he could just capture her and display her to the world. She was after all his by right of marriage. But first he had to prevent her swimming away. If he could only find some means to communicate, he might for instance tell her he loved her so desperately that he'd searched the world's oceans for her. He placed one hand on his heart and held out the other in what he hoped resembled supplication. She showed no reaction, although there swept through her a sense of bitterness, such as she had not felt for many years, triggered by the remembrance of how he had betrayed her love for him. He thought he might kneel, like he had done the time he'd proposed to her. What a happy day that had been. She watched as he laboured to drop to one knee on the harbour floor, raising a cloud of sand. Above the waves, three hundred and fifty bomb-laden aircraft of the Imperial Japanese Navy were approaching swiftly from the north.

Epilogue: No illusions were harmed nor living creatures mistreated in the making of this feature. It's just a story. (Ah, but that photograph...)

In other unrelated mermaid stuff, if you've not seen Guillermo del Toro's masterpiece of movie-making 'The Shape Of Water ' (2017), do search it out, an absolutely brilliant film, well worthy of its twelve Oscar nominations and the four Oscars it scooped, including Best Picture and Best Director. I would have given Sally Hawkins the Best Actress Oscar as well, but I'm biased. 

I leave you with these lines from Neil Young's song 'Milky Way ':
There's a mermaid in the Milky Way
With an ocean liner
There's no moon tonight so you might see her
And her ocean liner
Up in the stars

Thanks for reading, my deep divers, S ;-)

24 comments:

Binty said...

Crazy picture! Interesting tail/tale. 😉

Anonymous said...

Beautiful real story, as I do believe mermaids have an existance in the ocean from human to mermaids, as there has been many sightings worldwide. Love the picture Steve!

Tim Collins said...

I love the label splash fiction and enjoyed your intriguing tale and the way you gave it an historical setting.👍

Lisbeth Tex said...

Fabulous (literally). I love this. Thank you! 💙

Ed Ward said...

National Oceanographic made me smile, and a clever lead into the day Pearl Harbour got blitzed by the Japs. BTW where did you source the photograph? It's most eyecatching.

Dan Ewers said...

Very good Steve. I agree with you about Shape of Water as well, top film.

Nigella D said...

I enjoyed reading your short story and what an amazing photograph (not real, obvs).

Amber Molloy said...

I enjoyed your splash fiction. Please tell me that Mary Lou/Ocean Stream was going to survive the attack on Pearl Harbour.

Mac Southey said...

Very cleverly constructed and beautifully written Steve. I loved the witty touches (Chasing Tail, National Oceanographic). Buck was obviously going to get his comeuppance when the harbour and his boat got bombed, but I too hoped that Ocean Stream might survive down in the depths.

Boz said...

Almost believable la! 👍

Jen McDonagh said...

You can't beat a well-told tail ;)

Dani Merakli said...

It used to worry me where mermaids got their bras from. At least yours in au naturel, so slightly more credible. 😉 As others have observed, you've made an interesting tale out of the topic.

Mel Pearce said...

Splash fiction, very good! And the image is a great 'prompt card' for a creative writing exercise. Your story certainly engaged me.👏

Debbie Laing said...

You are a fabulist :)

Jane Stuart said...

Thanks for this Steve. Loved the story!

Writer21 said...

Great, Stev, thanks. One of my favourite films, incidentally, is Splash!

Billy Banter said...

Ocean Stream sounds like a porn star name.🤣

Jacqueline Woods said...

Thanks. A fascinating picture and wonderful, believable story to accompany it.
My granddaughters love the Little Mermaid stories but it seems very unfair and biased that she must sacrifice her voice in order to live with her prince. We need more positive mermaid stories!

Zoe Nikolopoulou said...

Wonderful Steve. Do you know the story of Thessaloniki, sister of Alexander the Great? She was so stricken with grief when he died that she threw herself into the Aegean hoping to drown but was turned into a mermaid.

Malcolm Drysdale said...

What a great story from an evocative picture.

Seb Politov said...

Ooh, well imagined. Nicely dove-tailing fantasy into history.👏

Carey Jones said...

That's an intriguing photo and what a great story you've spun off it.

Peter Fountain said...

Very good, Steve. What's the other story behind the photograph?

Marianne Seymour said...

I loved the story, almost a prose poem.