written and posted by members of Lancashire Dead Good Poets' Society

Saturday, 31 August 2019

Playfulness

I hoped the theme of playfulness would provide ample scope for members of the Dead Good Blogging collective to have some fun with words this week... Not so, apparently. No one could come out to play. Hey ho, so it goes.

Just me then, and I'm going to suggest that all play is creative. When we play, we invent, we imagine, we explore new possibilities and we riff on the joy of the thing - we do it for fun. If it wasn't fun, it wouldn't be play, it would be work!

The converse is not necessarily true, of course. A lot of creativity lacks playfulness, often of necessity. What I mean is that the majority of creations have a functional purpose to fulfil; they are designed to do a job - from the seed drill through the Bessemer converter to the telephone exchange and the commuter train - and they need to work reliably first and foremost. Playfulness doesn't really come into it except peripherally perhaps at the top and tail ends of the process, in concept and elements of styling.

Maybe Vilfredo Pareto's principle can be applied here - the 80/20 rule: utilitarian creations as 80% functionality/ practicality and 20% styling/playfulness? I'm just speculating, thinking out loud. And what about artistic creations then? Are they approximately the opposite way round: 20% functionality and 80% playfulness? Or isn't that a meaningful analysis? What do you reckon?

Here below is exhibit A from a (not so) recent show of works at Blackpool's Grundy Art Gallery, a rusty old cement mixer given a sort of M&S make-over through clever use of neon lighting - literally brilliant, evidently playful and probably no use for mixing cement anymore, though I'd happily install it in my living-room if I had the space and could afford the electricity bill!


Does the 80% playfulness theory work for all plastic arts? And what about music and literature? I'm not sure. However, as this is a blog and not a polemic, let's not get too bogged down. I think what I'm trying to suggest is simply that playfulness (that lively, unrestrained, let's see where it goes mode) is merely a minor contributor to all great (and practical) inventions, but surely a major component in the creation of all great (and impractical?) works of art. Still confused? Time to move on to this week's latest poetic creation (80% play, 20% hard labour).

A couple of years ago I crafted quite a reasonable poem out of the collection of stray lines and phrases that I keep jotted down at the back of my notebooks. With some appropriate sequencing and a bit of additional invention, they took on a workable life of their own. I've since built up another list of odds and ends looking for a home, so this week I've repeated the exercise for the fun of it, which I think is a fittingly ironic title for what transpired:

For The Fun Of It
Every carriage ought to state on the side:
'Warning - may contain nuts.'
For here they all ride, as we slowly roll
past the panoramic misery of soggy sheep,
villages deep in mud and county-line crime,
through one ramshackle station after another,
winding across the breaking back
of sodden northern England,
powerhouse/poorhouse/outhouse
(delete to suit) of a once-mighty nation,
like some thread-worm of the apocalypse.

It's murder on the TransPennine express
these days - never on time, never a seat
and every face you happen to meet
between Scarborough and Lime Street
could have come straight from the files
of Alphonse Bertillon's archives,
biometric causes celebres, degenerate offspring
of a race which shaped the modern world
and won the war but lost the peace.

Do you ever have days like this,
when everyone just looks weird?

Beery stag boys with colourful socks
crowd the aisles, cans in hand,
with leery smiles for the salty girls
who they'll mistake to their cost
for easy street meat. The fools.
Hairdressers and make-up artists by day,
break-up artists by night,
they're willing to be pounced
for an ounce of herbal high but
they're tough little madams the lot,
all trying to slip the domestic knot
for a few more carefree years.

Have you ever known rides like this,
where everyone just sounds wired?

We crawl on a viaduct into the city,
nearing journey's end, crammed in so cosy
that we couldn't fall if we tried. I spy
through every TV tenement window
a different real-life drama flicker,
for we live in uncurtained times,
our poverty on show to all the world;
while in the thoroughfare below
seethes an angry throng fuelled by the narcotic
of fanatical devotion, spitting misbegotten hate
upon their neighbours, flanked by ranks
of tooled-up insecurity men. The pity is
we've been here before and it doesn't bode well.

Did you ever hear the proverb that says
'Better to travel in hope than to arrive'?

Thanks for reading. We have an interesting week ahead,  S ;-)

36 comments:

Anonymous said...

'Murder on the Transpennine express' - brilliant, made me spit my tea out!

Binty said...

I love the new poem :)

Matt West said...

Good one buddy. I don't get all this 80/20 stuff but your poem sounds brilliant to me, funny and spot on. UTMP!

Deke Hughes said...

Leaving the 'not a polemic' aside (because I din't know what to think about it), your latest wordsmithery is mighty fine. At times I can't tell whether you're being playful or serious...or maybe both at the same time. Anyway, it is a clever and striking piece and I'm sure it will work well in performance.

Boz said...

Whoa yes - sound blog Steve.

Tom Shaw said...

Here's my take Steve. When the inspiration is running its playful and fun - but sometimes you just have to grind it out and that feels like hard work. It took me 27 takes to get a song down right last night. Bruising. Your poem is the tops btw.

Ben Templeton said...

Genius poetry!

Rochelle said...

I'm full of admiration for those among us who can turn out one good poem every few months, never mind almost every other week! I'd say your snippets have been put to good use Steve. Well done.

K. Worth said...

20% inspiration and 80% perspiration is the general rule in my case. You appear to be on a bit of a roll at the moment, some great poems in the last 3 months: Love Among The Scatter Cushions, Pontiac Dreams, Lit From Below, the Wendy Sewell one and now this. I'm pleased for you and a little envious. Keep them coming - and think about a collection.

Steve Rowland said...

Deke - as far as I understand it myself, I'd label the poem tragi-comic ;-)

Ross Madden said...

That cement-mixer art installation is fantastic. It fits your 80/20 theory and I hope it's lighting up someone's living space nightly, not sitting neglected in a garage or warehouse. As for your funny/serious poem, it works for me. I really like the way you've put it together.

Anonymous said...

Acid satire! Love it :)

Nigella D said...

Steve, I always have to look things up when I read your blogs. This time it was Pareto and Alphonso Bertillon. I'm not complaining, just saying - I'm wiser now by far! I really liked the flow and ideas in your latest poem.

Jambo said...

Wickedly good poetry!👍

Zander Brookes said...

It strikes me that most of your blogs are playful Steve. You delight in words and ideas and that communicates itself well via your writing. Keep up the good fight as well for our football club.

CI66Y said...

I know in your mail out you jokingly said skip the essay if you must, but I assume you're interested in our thoughts about what you wrote, so here goes.

I think there are some basic truths in what you say about play versus work and how it applies to the creative process though I suspect Pareto is a bit of a red herring. I also suspect that many people who do highly technical things like designing micro-processors, engines et cetera might consider what they do as akin to playing with ideas and not as work at all; (it just looks complex and boring to us).

The cement mixer installation looks awesome and I hugely enjoyed your latest poem with its assumption of such a slightly misanthropic world view as travel on the Trans-penine express could well induce in ordinarlily long-suffering northerners. Well done my friend.

Anonymous said...

That's a thought-provoking poem and no mistake.

Harry Lennon said...

Brilliant poetry Steve. Is it really cobbled together from odds and ends? Then I'm amazed and take off my metaphorical hat.

Tina Watson said...

I know your poem is somewhat tongue-in-cheek but it does a very good job of depicting the sense of decline that typifies 21st century northern England (can't speak for any other region) and the worrying social trends that austerity has helped foster. You're right, we have been here before and it doesn't bode well.

F O'Jay said...

Thanks for another fine blog and a fabulous poem: absolute class.

Anonymous said...

Very good. I love For The Fun Of It. Bravo.

Anonymous said...

That blog got me thinking, so well done for that. I'm with you on the approx. 80/20 for artistic creations and 20/80 for industrial creations but more thah that I must congratulate you on a brilliant poem.

Tyger Barnett said...

Sounds like it's better not to travel at all!!! (LOL) Great poem.

Anonymous said...

That poem - exceptional!

Rod Downey said...

I love the poem for its satirical social observation, its oblique sense of foreboding - which I'm sure we all feel right now - and the sheer brilliance of some of the imagery: "like some threadworm of the apocalypse", "break-up artists by night", "we live in uncurtained times". As for working in a reference to Alphonse Bertillon, a great leap of faith in your readers :)

Anonymous said...

Pareto, Bertillon and a cracking good poem - these blogs are an education! 👍

East Lancs Frank said...

Seriously good that For The Fun Of It. I was most impressed. Where do you perform your work?

Brian Cassell said...

In my experience, perspiration (hard graft) is the major component of anything - be it artistic or utilitarian as you put it - and inspiration (that sense of playfulness or fun) is the occasional bolt from the blue that makes it exciting. I think your poem is terrific and if it really is built from odds and ends you really wouldn't know. Very well done, I should say.

Anonymous said...

Your poem is very good, funny/sad.

Anonymous said...

Very good blog and poem.

Bruce Paley said...

I don't know about your Pareto proposition. For me it's largely a case of perseverance working up a nugget of inspiration into something worthy. I tell you, I envy your Fun Of It poem - very good, wish I'd written it myself.

Anonymous said...

Excellent!

Jon Cromwell said...

Ha Ha - 20% dystopian, 80% brilliant :)

Anonymous said...

Pithy poetry. Well done.

Anonymous said...

The Met Mayors of both Liverpool and Manchester have requested that rail be renationalised. Rumour is that Northern will be stripped of its franchise in the new year.

Gemma Gray said...

Very informative. I've learned about the Pareto principle and the father of the identikit process (had to look them both up) and how crap railways in the north seem to be. Plus I think your dystopian poem is brilliant. Good blogging value all round, I'd say. Thank you.