Confused? I was - that is why it took so long to write something that made sense. I realised that some simple joining words, although fine one way, just did not make any sense when I read the line backwards. Anyway through trial and error I came up with a simple, short piece.
You will note that the strategic use of punctuation and the moving of the sentences to a different position seems to work, whilst keeping the reverse order of the piece and (hopefully) still making some sense....so here goes...
Palindrome
Understand! Sometimes there is nature -
Understand! Sometimes there is nature -
Gently winds blow nearby as
Floating clouds overhead
Following rivers evermore.
Why, it is destiny!
Destiny-is it? Why?
Evermore rivers following
Overhead clouds floating,
As nearby, blow winds gently.
Nature is there, sometimes - understand?
Happy palindrome week! Thanks for reading, Kath.
4 comments:
Great job Kathleen and I love the concrete form of the poem.
Yes, elegant and eloquent Kath ;-)
Really enjoyed th Kathleen,
Not an easy task.
Lovely.
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