I read the poem as a work in progress at the open mic night in St Annes last night and have made a couple of judicious changes to it as a result. See what you think...
And
The Sirens Sweetly Sing
Early
evening light is leaking
out
of wintry Blackpool skies;
this
is Central Drive preparing
for
the assault which will arrive
in
the bleakest hours of darkness.
On
the corner stands the hashman
with
his pockets full of wares,
tabs
and twists to suit all comers.
Surreptitious
stare the housewives
hurrying
home with bingo winnings,
when
the sirens start to sing.
Cats
inhabit undercarland
staring
wise into the night,
keeping
counsel, keeping foxwatch.
As
the stars wheel cross the heavens,
hear
the druggies spit and swear
at
throwing-out and throwing-up time.
Rowdy
revellers stagger past,
cursing
as they slip on dogshit,
shouting
into mobile phones
as
if we need to share their dramas,
while
the sirens sweetly sing.
Midnight
pissers water lamp-posts,
roosting
gulls look unconcerned,
branches
dance in manic patterns
weaving
wavering shadow shows
choreographed
by chilling wind.
Some
lovers moan on squeaky bedsprings,
passion
filtering through the blinds,
while
others consummate in doorways
coupling
like there’s no tomorrow,
steamy
breath and muffled cries
rise
as the sirens sweetly sing.
Weeds
grow rampant in the gutters,
eerie
flowerings of the night;
on
the pavement someone mutters
‘Oh
god help me, I am bleeding.’
There
is no one else in sight.
A
lonely bird begins to warble,
ushers
in another day;
frozen
trails on Central Drive,
the
evidence of last night’s traffic
glinting
in the pre-dawn half-light
as
the sirens fade away.
Thanks for reading. Have a good week, S :-)
1 comments:
Brilliant, Steve. Love this.
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