Deep and meaningful stuff, eh? You can check out The Hollies' take in the YouTube link appended at the end of today's blog. They were typically looking out at the external world.
Sunlight streaming in through a window is one of my favourite sights. Without being too fanciful it's quite a powerful (and romantic) image, as illustrated. I think it has to do with the source of life and light pouring into the (dark) soul. It doesn't work on grey and wet days - such as today!
Meanwhile, I'll confess I derive quite some fascination from looking briefly into windows as I go walkabout around Blackpool, not in any creepy voyeuristic way I hope you'll understand. Isn't it human nature to be curious? For me it's more an imaginative exercise, extrapolating from the occasional glimpse into someone's front room and speculating as to what sort of person or people might reside within and what their lives might be like. It's the wannabe novelist in me taking an interest in the unknown, keeping my powers of observation sharp and fuelling invention.
I couldn't blog on this theme without mentioning defenestration, a mode of dispatch which intrigued me as a schoolboy studying European history - I think I was impressed that there was even a word for throwing people out of windows to their untimely death. It appears to have been particularly popular in Prague, with famous incidents occurring early in the 15th and 17th centuries; and then much more recently in 1948 when the Czech Foreign Minister Jan Masaryk was assassinated by being bundled out of a second-storey window at the Foreign Ministry clad only in his pyjamas, to die a death convenient to Moscow in the courtyard below.
Don't Throw It, Mrs! |
But enough of such foolishness. It was Mandy, I think, who requested that I shouldn't explain too much of the background to my poetry, thereby allowing the reader to come to the work with as open a mind as possible, so as to make of the poem what (s)he will. This, then, is my newly written through-a-window poem, based on a true event dating back forty-something summers.
Back of Fore Street, end of another
long, hot Devon summer day
and I'm sitting in my darkened room
rear window open wide to cool,
listening to a blackbird serenade
the slow-arriving night,
when a golden square of light
opens up across the way,
frames a girl dancing
naked in her bedroom,
to music that I cannot hear.
Of course my eyes are drawn,
whose wouldn't be?
I try not to stare
but it's an enchanting sight
as unselfconsciously she twirls,
arms raised, smile on her face,
gyrating in her private fantasy.
I can't imagine I would ever
do the same, but is it so strange,
this unfettered expression
of freedom and delight?
The girl across the way
dances naked in her bedroom.
She doesn't think that anybody sees
the dark triangle in the golden square.
Either that,
or she's dancing just for me.
But I think her pleasure
is as innocent as mine
and the blackbird's song
and the humming
of a washing-machine
and the passage of time.
Click on the song title to hear the jingly-jangly joy of 1965-era Hollies: Look Through Any Window
Thanks for reading and have a good week, S ;-)
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I'd forgotten all about defenestration. Isn't Steve Biko meant to have gone the same way? turfed out of a window in police HQ during the apartheid regime?
I'm always looking out...though I've never seen a naked dancer at dusk! Another interesting blog and a charming (and audacious) poem.
On form as ever Steve. Another very good read and I enjoyed the latest poem. The Hollies were way before my time but I see what you mean about jangly pop. Also, a nice touch to add a poppy to your blog. Well done and thank you.
Defenestration, that's a new one on me. As well-written and informtive as ususal Mr R.
I'm a looker-out. Looking in is rude (I was taught). I enjoyed your latest poem, improbable though the premise is.
Premium blogging :)
Another fab blog Steve. I really enjoy reading them. Your latest poem is lovely.
Why Prague I wonder? If you're familiar with Dario Fo's political farce Accidental Death of an Anarchist you'll know that defenestration from Milan police headquarters was central to the plot. Maybe it's a crazy mid-European thing, almost Kafkaesque. I very much enjoyed your blog and your subtle libertarian poetry. Keep it up.
Ha ha ha buddy. So was that you peering through my window the other night? :)
Very good Steve.
You must be familiar with Jorma Kaukonen/Hot Tuna's scabrous 'Day To Day Out The Window Blues'? Great blog Steve and a fine poem. What you recall was not an uncommon sight in the City back in the day; more unusual in rural England I'm guessing :)
I enjoyed this; usually a look out, rarely a look in sort of guy. Another good poem there Steve. Are you planning a book? I know you've hinted at it in the past.
Love the subtle poetry.
Great blog :) I love the dancer. When I was wondering what to write (which didn't happen), The Hollies' Look Through Any Window dominated all thoughts and has been in my head all week. 🎶🎶
A fascinating read and what a wonderful poem. Well done and thank you.
Ooh I love the poem!
As ever, a most interesting blog; plus great photos and a really lovely poem. Thanks for sharing Steve.
Beuatifully expressed. all of it.
What a great read and a fabulous poem ⭐️
That's so lovely.
The outside is in and the inside is out.
Looking into windows - I can't help it. I'm not nosey, just inquisitive! (LOL) I greatly enjoyed the latest poem. Thank you.
Another great read and another great poem. Keep them coming Saturday Blogger :)
What a lovely poem.
Class that 👍👍👍👍👍
Very good Steve.
Windows are for looking out of - fine views from mine. I thought your accidental voyeur poem was very well done.
You write so well.
Excellent blog and poetry (and images). Thanks for sharing Steve. MW
A fine blog my friend. Thank you much for sharing. 👍
Another great piece of writing Steve. I've not listened to the Hollies in years but it set me thinking and this is what I thought: compare and contrast the hit you mention in your blog with the Beatles' I'm Looking Through You (off Rubber Soul) from the same year and it's obvious why the former were pleasant lightweights and the latter were well on the road to genius.
As for your latest poem, top marks for that. Very well done and said.
In Golden Square you've taken a poignant moment/observation and rendered it timeless in words. That's quite an accomplishment.
Windows are for looking thru & surely it's a 2-way thing. Luv your pome, so beautifully expressed. ❤️
'the dark triangle in the golden square' - killer line, la! 👍
Genius, sir!
That's another fabulous blog Steve.
Very good! And another solid display from your boys today.
Loved the new blog. Those crazy Czechs (or Slovaks?). Your poem is beautiful. Well done and thank you for sharing.
Brilliant Steve. How is the wannabe novelist getting on with that novel?
Most instructive Steve. I'd heard about Chopin's piano being hurled out of a window, didn't realise it was true or why it happened. As for your latest poem, it's beautifully phrased and so evocative of one of life's 'perfect' moments.
Bravo! 👍👍👍
Another great blog Steve. Your poetry possesses a seductive beauty :)
Bonzer poem Steve - but I think you know that. Weoll done.
Great blog, fabulous poem. 👍
What a lovely poem Steve.
Readers of your excellent blog might be interested to know that Allan Clarke, one-time lead singer with The Hollies (from whom he retired 20 years ago) has recently released a new solo album Resurgence. When one window closes another one opens, as they say.
Thank you one and all for your kind words, positive feedback and views on window-gazing. Just to reply to a few comments: Clive - I don't think Steve Biko was defenestrated. I've never seen that claimed. Beaten mercilessly by police interrogators yes, resulting in fatal injuries they tried to pass off as an accident. Mary Jane - improbable it might sound, but it did happen, (truth as we know being stranger than fiction), though to Dan's point less common in south-west England than in the free-wheeling hippy mecca of San Francisco!
Thanks Steve for another fine blog and a delightful poem.
Brilliant that! What a well written blog and a great poem. Windows used to be taxed once upon a time (yep, the window tax) - can you believe it?
What a fun blog. Give me a window and I'll look in - or out. It's what they're there for :)
As for the poem, as someone else described, it's delightful Steve.
Golden Square - brilliant poetry, I love it man!
Another cracking blog and we love the poem. Keep them coming Steve.
Fab blog and poem :)
Steve many thanks for the link. What an impressive blog, fascinating to read, beautifully illustrated and with a charming poem to boot. I shall follow future editions with interest. Well done mate.
I know who I'd like to defenestrate!!! Great blog Steve and another subtly excellent poem.
That is a truly lovely poem ❤️
Magical poetry. Really very good.
That's an excellent blog and poem, thanks for sharing.
Very good Steve. Thanks for the link to the Hollies btw (slightly before my time) - a joyful and innocent sound matching the tone of your fine poem. 👍
Thanks for this Steve. Your blogs are always a treat. I love Golden Square, beautifully pitched. As an observation regarding windows, this is the one time of year when I find myself staring almost hypnotically into people's front rooms, lured by the twinkling lights of their Christmas decorations :) x
Very good.
That poem is class mate 👍
Wondeful poetry Steve. So evocative.
Really enjoyed this Steve, great blogging and poem. Beware window-cleaners is my advice :)
I'm lovin that poem! ❤️
Top notch Steve and a real pleasure to read - 0ne of my favourite of your blogs so far. That poem is delightfully atmospheric. Well done.
Yes, as others have stated, a most entertaining post and another fine poem. Thanks for sharing Steve.
I remember the back bedroom you had in that house in Exeter.
This blog was such a great read, very well written 👍👍👍👍👍
Enchanting poetry, really beautifully written.
I have to say this Windows blog is one of your best! And the poem reads as a beautifully measured and contemplative celebration of an innocence lost in the sensory overload of the 21st century. Very well done.
Wow, Golden Square - a beautifully captured moment (or memory of one). I love it.
A good friend of mine forwarded me a link to this blog and I just want to say how much I enjoyed it, especially the poem.
Fabulous poetry and so cleverly conveyed :)
Yes, very good.
A great blog and poem Steve. Defenestration is not something I've come across before. Golden Square is beautifully written.
A great read and a gently uplifting poem :)
One of your best!
Golden Square - beautifully expressed ❤️
That poem is one of the loveliest things I've read all year. Well done you.
I love the poem Steve.
A most entertaining blog and an utterly beautiful poem. x
the dark triangle in the golden square: what a clever and haunting image.
If you're counting, I'm a looking out (of windows) person, but not the curtain-twitching type. I'm happy to sit and stare at the world going by.
There was also a famous case in the 1980s of a young English woman (Helen Smith?) who was pushed out of a window in an ex-pat residence in Saudi. Private Eye took up the story - no one ever brought to justice, one big cover-up.
What a lovely poem.
A most enjoyable read.
I'd say that's one of your best.
Fabulous blog. Loved the poem.
Loved the blog and that's a stunning poem. Well done.
What a beautifully created poem. It casts an almost spell-binding mood. I love lines such as 'the slow arriving night', 'the dark triangle in the golden square' (very clever), 'the humming of a washing-machine and the passage of time' - such richly evocative imagery throughout.
I really enjoyed this, a clever and beautifully written post and curiously topical in these strange days of self-isolating. The poem is lovely.👍
Lots of looking out of the window just now! I love that poem :)
Sweet!
that's a genius poem ❤️
Catching uo with some of your earlier posts - this one is terrific, funny, informative and with a lovely poem. Excellent.
A splendid blog and poem.
Gorgeous xxx
Beautifully written, beautifully illustrated and with a charming poem. Thank you for a life-affirming read in these most difficult of days.👍
What a fabulous blog.
I thought this was tremendous, really very good indeed.
Great! Thank you. ❤️
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Such good atmosphere in the poetry.
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Good!
Intense. Not contrived....?
What a lovely blog, funny, informative, and evocative poetry. 👍
Glimpses through windows can often be intriguing, just not usually as revealing as the one in your atmospheric poem.
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