written and posted by members of Lancashire Dead Good Poets' Society

Saturday 4 May 2024

This Writing Game

Leonard Cohen once asked Bob Dylan “How long does it take to write a song, Bobby?” To which Dylan replied “You tell me first.” “It takes three years”, said Leonard. “Three minutes,” Dylan told Cohen. “You see, I’m a three-minute guy.” That exchange is said to have taken place around 1967.

What are we to make of it, apart from the fact that at least one of them was probably exaggerating?

Cohen always thought of himself as a poet (and novelist) first and foremost. He only turned to music when his novels didn't sell and poetry couldn't pay the bills. Dylan on the other hand self-deprecatingly claimed he was just a song and dance man. Yet he's the one who was awarded the Nobel Prize for Literature in October 2016, just a month before Leonard Cohen died. When Cohen was asked in jocular fashion by an interviewer if he'd forgotten to fill out the forms and if he'd like to comment on Dylan's award, Len replied somewhat gnomically: "It's like pinning a medal on Mount Everest for being the highest mountain." 

Laughing Len and Freewheelin' Bob
Reading that exchange between the two writers made me think about the different approaches to their craft. They were both north American Jewish kids in love with words and wanting to forge a living from writing...and I don't think it matters than one wrote primarily poems and novels and the other wrote primarily songs. (Of course it shouldn't be overlooked that Dylan also published a collection of experimental prose poems written in 1964/65.)

Cohen went to McGill University and read English Literature, wrote poetry which he performed in the cafes in Montreal and also played in a country music band. After graduating he embarked on an MA but dropped it in favour of trying to make a living as a writer, using inheritance money from his grandmother to relocate to Hydra in Greece in 1960 where the weather was good and the living was cheap. 

Dylan enrolled at the University of Minnesota but claims he didn't attend much, got kicked out of English class for using four-letter words and spent most of his time learning to play guitar and getting into the local folk scene. He dropped out of university at the end of his first year and moved to New York City in 1961 intent on becoming a folk musician. The city library and the folkies he met on the circuit of clubs and coffee houses became his real education as a writer.

It's true that Cohen used to take a long time to write his poems, novels and songs. He was a patient and studious writer, working at his craft every day, revising, re-shaping, maturing and polishing what he felt he needed to say. He never forced writing out into the world until he felt the work was ready, was as nigh on perfect as it was possible to be. When he said it sometimes took him three years to complete a poem or a song to his satisfaction, he wasn't exaggerating. In fact later in his career he confided that some works took five or ten years to gestate.

Dylan on the other hand was the hare to Cohen's tortoise. Impatient and mercurial and fuelled by amphetamines where Cohen made do with retsina, it's true he didn't take long to write songs. It was almost as if he was extemporising in the beat tradition. Songs and poetry came pouring out of him, more inspiration than perspiration. He rarely revised what he wrote and is famous in the recording studio for wanting to do everything in one take then move on quickly to the next song. Admittedly three minutes was a somewhat dubious claim, especially as many of his greatest songs are twice or three times that long just to sing, but the difference between the two is clear, minutes as opposed to years, sparking as opposed to smouldering. Maybe it's a question of temperament, for the way they worked was really at opposite ends of a spectrum

Dylan appears to have enjoyed a facility that Cohen did not have, dare I say it a livelier imagination and a brain operating at a higher voltage, closer to genius, and I think Cohen clearly acknowledged that Dylan was worthy of the citation bestowed by the Nobel committee. Of course, it's not really a competitive undertaking, though egos do come into it. We're lucky to have had both Bob and Len in our lifetimes.

I suspect I'm nearer the Cohen end of the spectrum than the Dylan end in terms of modus operandi. Of course I wouldn't claim to be anywhere near either of them in terms of talent. Nonetheless I have been working towards a first collection of poems over the last few years and it should be here in a couple of months' time.

the cover of my upcoming poetry collection
If you enjoy reading these Saturday blogs and the poetry they contain, From the Imaginarium pulls seventy-five of the best poems together. That's the plug for now. More news when I have it.

Bob Dylan, if  by any unlikely chance you're reading this blog, excuse me for reproducing one of my favourite Leonard Cohen poems in preference to one of yours. I'm just trying to even things, giving a shout out to K2.

There Are Some Men
There are some men
who should have mountains
to bear their names to time.

Grave-markers are not high enough
or green,
and sons go far away
to lose the fist
their father's hand will always seem.

I had a friend:
he lived and died in mighty silence
and with dignity,
left no book, son, or lover to mourn.

Nor is this a mourning-song
but only a naming of this mountain
on which I walk,
fragrant, dark, and softly white
under the pale of mist.
I name this mountain after him.

                                        Leonard Cohen, 1961

Thanks for reading, S ;-)

22 comments:

Chris Wilkie said...

Good news about the book. 👍

Anonymous said...

Enjoyed that Steve. Looking forward to the book.

terry quinn said...

Really enjoyed the article. 3 minutes? Mmmmmm.

Looking forward to reading the collection. Hope you have a Launch do.

Definitely Len for me.

Seb Politov said...

Surely Dylan was just showing off? (Not without just cause, but still...)

Debbie Laing said...

The tortoise wins for me. I'm probably in a minority but I prefer Leonard Cohen to Dylan and don't care that he took longer to create and perfect his art. I'm loving the look of your book cover.

Binty said...

Nobody likes a 3 minute man! (LOL) Exciting news about your book.

Mel Reeves said...

I've never read any of their novels or poetry but they've made some of my favourite records: Songs from a Room, Blonde on Blonde, Songs of Love and Hate, Blood on the Tracks, Desire etc. They both got there. Surely it doesn't matter how.

Ross Madden said...

Fascinating for the insight into their contrasting approaches. Dylan was/is obviously more prolific and I guess it's true his influence was the greater all way through the 60s and 70s, plus Cohen seemed to burn out and retire for a while. I liked the poem of his you chose (and the mountain in-joke). 👏

Anonymous said...

Yes Leonard Cohen is wordsmith I am a fan Your book will be a good read no doubt

Ben Templeton said...

That Bob Dylan. He's lying! A thought-provoking read. And ooh, at last your book. Looking forward to that.

Peter Garcia said...

A fascinating perspective on two giants of 20th century popular culture.

Jen McDonagh said...

I love Leonard Cohen's music (never read his books) and I don't have much time for Bob Dylan, but I guess there's no arguing with the Nobel Committee. the news of your book is exciting. More details please.

Tom Shaw said...

Dylan for me. The Nobel citation was spot on: "for having created new poetic expressions within the great American song tradition". Think of how he transformed folk music in the early '60s with a run of albums from Freewheelin' to John Wesley Harding. Along with The Beatles, he was peerless then, And he followed it up in the '70s with Blood On The Tracks, Desire and Street Legal. Cohen was right, Dylan is an absolute Everest.

Kevin Crowe said...

As a fan of both since near the start of their (musical) careers (yes, I'm that old), I enjoy the work of both. And I found this article fascinating. I have seen both live on several occasions (Dylan more often than Cohen) and these days tend to listen to Dylan more often. I would only take issue with one thing in this article. I think the author is wrong when he writes that Dylan "...rarely revised what he wrote" (actually as he is still living, recording and writing, that should be in the present tense). Dylan has always rewritten and reworked his songs, often prior to recording them and often after recording them. One of the delights of his "Official Bootleg" series of albums is to see the way some of his songs developed, from early tapes and demos to the finished product on the record. It is also interesting to see the way that lines and ideas from songs he discarded found their way into more finished work. Also, we know from both his and producer Daniel Lanois' different accounts that Dylan spent a long time in the studio developing and re-recording the songs on his 1989 album "Oh Mercy". Accounts from some of the session musicians on 1966's "Blonde on Blonde" confirm that Dylan spends a long time in the studio. If we add to that the changes Dylan makes to his songs in concerts, we see someone who is never satisfied and always striving to improve (even if sometimes in concert, the changes aren't improvements at all). Dylan is a myth maker who over the decades has presented himself in many different characters. I think the story of him coming up with songs quickly and then never revising them is one of the myths he has promoted about himself.

Dan Francisco said...

An interesting read and I suspect the truth for both writers is less extreme than their exchange suggests. I'm sure Dylan often took longer than 3 minutes and I'm fairly certain he did make revisions to his lyrics. Equally, Cohen must have had moments of inspiration. By the way, do you happen to know who Leonard is referring to in his poem? Looking forward to your book.

Steve Rowland said...

Kevin: Thanks for taking the time to respond.. I suspect we're probably "of an age", and I've seen them both live on several occasions. I was certainly into Dylan well before Cohen had recorded any music. I knew LC first from his poetry and novels. I suppose my comment that Dylan "rarely revised what he wrote" applies more to his early years (pre-motorcycle accident). I take your point that with the benefit of hindsight (and the Bootleg Series) we have a more forensic view of how he developed material. It wasn't always obvious that the lyrics changed, even when he scrapped sessions (i.e. original Blood On The Tracks) and started over. But we know how he has been re-interpreting his back catalogue for years (and not always for the better, as you noted). I concur with what you say about his myth-making though, and I appreciate the feedback.

Bella Jane Barclay said...

Your book. How exciting.

Yvonne S said...

Loved reading about the different approaches to writing of Cohen and Dylan. Also looking forward to your collection of poetry

Sophie Pope said...

I love Leonard Cohen. I think he comes out of this very well, while Dylan just sounds brash. Maybe he grew out of that as the years went by.

CI66Y said...

A fascinating read Steve. After our hammering at Leeds I feel like you did after Reading, let down by the team and literally deflated. Still, life goes on. Exciting news about your book. Put me down for a copy.

Anonymous said...

Enjoyed that Steve …

…. coincidentally in terms of song writing I was thumbing back through some recent recordings on my phone this morning and chanced upon 2 songs I wrote in 2016.

I got in the habit of recording songs to my phone rather than writing them down as musical notes, as the latter didn’t capture the tune or the melody and were just a bunch of letters Em A C# etc …

Reason I’m prattling on about this is 2 of the songs I chanced upon I have no recollection of writing or recording 😀 … one is called Escape Plan the other September Rain … I might dust them down breathe them back to life in the studio next month … so in my case it was 5 minutes to write and then 8+ years to re-discover and God knows what will become of them in the next couple of years - possibly nothing, let’s see 😀

Well done on the impending book btw Steve - I will buy one 👍

Loren Whistler said...

I was fortunate to see Leonard Cohen a few times. I've never been to a Dylan concert though, preferring his records to his live shows.