Monday, 16 September 2013

My life in Death - Poem inspired by the colour blue

09:05:00 Posted by Colin Davies , , , , , , , , , 2 comments
This weeks theme is the colour blue. For some reason this poem came into my mind. I hope you enjoy it.


My life in Death
In many shadows I walk
The moon's smile showing me the way
Streets in silver highlight with whispered talk
Shivers of a long forgotten day

I miss the warmth of sunshine in my blood
Destiny deals such a heavy hand
To walk once more through the early spring bud
Hearing the brass blasts of the Salvation band

But of all the things I miss in light
The scape I still yearn to view
To look up in to an infinite sky
And blind myself with spread of blue
Reactions:

2 comments:

Ashley R Lister said...

Like this. If I was going to offer one suggestion - I'd advise you to look again at the the third line of the second stanza.

Ash

Colin Davies said...

Thanks Ash