written and posted by members of Lancashire Dead Good Poets' Society

Saturday 3 October 2020

Shakers & Makers

Hmm - an odd title but I'm going to give it a go, if you'll indulge me in some reflections about those bad boys and girls of Greek divinity, shakers and makers if ever there were any, bossing it over bewildered mankind from up there on Olympus.

Offhand I can no longer remember precisely the chronology of pantheisms. The Egyptian and Sumerian divinities certainly pre-dated the Greek; and the various Indian, Judaic, Norse and South American deities came later. But it was the Greek civilisation (Mycenean, Aegean) that gave us the most complex and comprehensive panoply of gods and godesses, an extended dynasty of shakers and makers whose divine purpose and right was to order (and frequently disorder) the mortal world at their feet. 

Zeus overthrew his dad Cronos to become top god, he took Hera as wifey goddess and the pair of them got on like a mountain on fire. All of the immortals squabbled among themselves as siblings do; their divine offspring followed suit. They also mingled with mortals to make a breed of demi-gods and then championed their favourites against each other's chosen ones.

Eris was a top trouble-maker. She was goddess of strife and in revenge for not being invited to a wedding party she decided to sow discord and shake things up by promising the golden apple to the most beautiful goddess. Hera, Athena and Aphrodite were in the running, but how to decide the outcome and still maintain unity in the ranks? Zeus side-stepped the responsibility by giving the job to Paris, mortal son of Priam of Troy. (Google the Judgement of Paris if you want more background.) Hera, Athena and Aphrodite all tried to bribe Paris to choose them and Aphrodite, goddess of love, was successful in winning the beauty contest. Her promise to Paris was to reward him with the most beautiful woman on Earth.

This was Helen of Sparta, daughter of King Tyndareus and his wife Leda. If you don't know the story of Leda and the Swan, the legend was that Zeus disguised himself as a swan to woo Leda, the inference being that Helen, the most beautiful woman on Earth, was technically his daughter and a demi-god.

There was just one problem. Helen was happily married to Menelaus and they had a child. But Aphrodite made it and shook it so that Helen fell under Paris's spell and absconded with him back to Troy. 

Cue mayhem. For Menelaus had agreed a pact with the other suitors for Helen's hand back in the day, whereby if anyone came to steal her away from the one who became her husband, all the suitors would band together and set off to steal her back for him. That's how stuff was done in the ancient times, before lawyers, marriage guidance councillors and due process.

The act of reposession took ten years, cost thousands of lives and ended in the complete destruction by fire of a beseiged city via the cunning trick of a wooden horse. It's one of the most famous tales ever told and is the subject of my latest poem.


That's right, this week I offer you a poetic take on the story of the Trojan War. The ancient Greeks accepted the events detailed in the Iliad as true, but as the centuries rolled on it came to be thought by classical scholars that the depictions were largely mythical and Troy itself was a fiction. Everything changed in the mid 19th century when archaeologists identified the ruins of Hisarlik in what is now western Turkey as the indisputable site of ancient Troy. 

So why Troy Story VII? you might reasonably ask, focusing on the number rather than the pun and the clever graphic. That's because the site of Hisarlik/Troy, when excavated, was found to have many layers in its long and eventful past, as the city was flattened, rebuilt, extended, rased, rebuilt, deserted, re-founded and so on through distant historical times - and the layer (or version) of Troy that corresponded most closely to that described in Homer's epic, including its being burned to the ground, was Troy VII, dating from approximately 1200 BC - the Trojan War itself having raged, it is thought, from 1194 to 1184 BC.

When I said the story of the Trojan War, my poem is more of an epilogue, actually. The war itself was epic and its decade of events would require more time for the telling than I have here - so search out the Iliad if you're so inclined, a wonderful creation and a brilliant read. 

There are many different theories as to what happened to Menelaus and Helen after the sacking of Troy. My personal favourite is that they were reunited in Egypt after the cataclysm and that's where I've headed with today's offering from the imaginarium. 

By the way, I've made a bit of a compact with myself that this will be the last 'narrative' poem I write for a while - I'm going to try a different tack through the autumn. Here we go then...

Troy Story: The Epilogue
Ominous, that swept heap of dead flies
in a dusty Cairo courtyard corner;
Menelaus squatted in shade
beneath painfully fiery hibiscus
stubs a meditative cheroot, fingers
his nicotine-tinted whiskers,
a brooding presence playing for time.
He knows she lies in wait within
as pre-arranged, room shuttered dark.

Ten years though. Ten years since
that cheating piece of Divine tail
sailed out on Sparta, husband, child,
at the bidding of the directing Gods.
Her bad luck to be cast as the faithless
femme fatale. He knows that. Just as
he had no choice but to give chase,
couldn't  let it go, a pact of honour.
Outcome for the extras - utterly stark.

He lights another smoke, reflecting 
on good friends and comrades lost,
all that bloodshed on his head,
the heavy price they've had to pay
and he feels suddenly old, as day cools,
hibiscus flowers close and shadows fold 
across the yard. He squats immobile,
uncertain, stiff of limb and sore of heart
until he marks the dogs of evening bark.

And Helen wonders for how long 
this cloistered, fretful wait might go on, 
until he comes to claim her once again
as pre-arranged, as twenty years before. 
She was a beauty then, dutiful in love
until she let herself be led astray. And
what a heavy price they've had to pay. 
Will he understand? Find her lovely still?
Fear fills her breast. Those his footsteps, hark!

There you have it, lead-in to a difficult reunion. Yours to imagine what might transpire. It could go a number of ways. And before anyone takes me to task for dropping smoking materials into pre-history, it was a deliberate act of time-slipping. I'll leave you with this rather impressive marble depiction of the principle shakers and makers. 

Goodnight Vienna - statue of Zeus and Hera in the Austrian capital. 

Thanks for reading, have an epic week y'all. S ;-)

33 comments:

Nigella D said...

Very good Steve. You have a sureness of touch. Clever graphic and a lovely poem. I like your narrative poems. Please don't desert that style for good.

Tom Shaw said...

I saw the movie with Brad Pitt and Orlando Bloom but I can't even remember who played Menelaus and Helen. I don't know my Greek Myth so the background was informative and your spoof logo and poem are cool, though in my mind I saw Clint Eastwood outside a Best Western and maybe Liz Taylor waiting inside!

Boz said...

Top blogging la!

Dani Merakli said...

An interesting perspective Steve. According to the Odyssey, Helen returned to Sparta witn Menelaus and they lived happily together. I suppose they may have got there via Egypt. I love the Troy Story logo!

Brett Cooper said...

The psychology of it is interesting, assuming that Menelaus and Helen were more than just playthings of the gods. I've seen the comment above from Tom Shaw and in my mind'e eye I have the contemporary pairing of Robert Downey Jr and Liv Tyler.

Carey Jones said...

I like your depiction of the Greek gods and godesses as a dynasty of squabbling siblings and their offspring. They really did make their divinities in their own image, didn't they! The Toy Story steal was clever and I absolutely love the poem.

Jools said...

It would be a comfort to think that they did live happily reconciled after all that they had gone through!

Martin Brewster said...

An interesting and fairly light-hearted take on Greek gods etc and the background to the Trojan War and an intriguing poem of some intensity. Thanks.

Lizzie Fentiman said...

Nice one fella. Weren't we all brought up on the tales of Greek gods and heroes? I like the way you've tried to make the hypothetical reunion a bit contemporary as well as it being a psychological drama of some intensity; and the repetition of the 'heavy price they've had to pay' is quite telling.

Bickerstaffe said...

Interesting details about Troy being real etc. and I liked what you've done with your poem, quite a poignant perspective on a relationship pulled around by 'fate'.

Saskia Parker said...

That's just brilliant, Steve. Made me cry! 💙

Jazmeen said...

The trouble with pantheons: they were created by men!

CI66Y said...

Very good read, great poem. It brought back memories of those books we used to read as kids, Tales of Greek Heroes/Tales of Troy. (I forget the author's name.)

Billy Banter said...

The face that munched a thousand chips! (LOL)

Steve Rowland said...

BB you wag, wrong pantheon! Chips were South American, so Aztec or Inca pal.

Clive, I enjoyed the books you refer to, by Roger Lancelyn Green. I must have read and re-read them when I was about 9 or 10 years old. A friend asked me the other day where my abiding love of Greece and all things Greek derives from and I think now that reading those books must have planted the seed.

Rochelle said...

Another sparkling blog. I loved the poem, very moving. Well done Steve.

Deke Hughes said...

I enjoyed Troy Story. Don't give up completely on narrative poetry. You carry it off very well.

terry quinn said...

Excellent poem. I have the video cassette, dvd and t-shirt of Michael Woods series 'In Search of the Trojan War'.

Ben Templeton said...

Thanks for sharing Steve, a beautifully weighted account of the background to the Trojan War and an excellent poem, with extra points for the funny Toy Story visual pun. Stay safe in difficult times up north!

Jen McDonagh said...

Ooh, another great blog Steve. Thanks for keeping them coming, a real pick-up in discordant times. I absolutely love what you've done with the Troy Story poem.

Having read through the comments above I thought some information about Roger Lancelyn Green might be of interest to you and your readers. Did you know that he lived just down the coast from you on the Wirral? At Poulton Hall in fact, where he was Lord of the Manor in the house that his family had owned for over 900 years. His love of writing for children was sparked when at Oxford, where he studied under CS Lewis and was a member of the Inklings literary circle with Lewis, Tolkien and company. I believe his son Richard followed in his footsteps as an author.

Miriam Fife said...

A most entertainingly written blog and lovely poem. Well done.

Ross Madden said...

I like those elements of your poem that might just seem like scene-setting but I suspect mean much more and have probably been deliberately placed, like the pile of dead flies at the beginning, the fiery hibiscus, a room shuttered dark, the dogs of evening... A very well-constructed and moving poem.

Binty said...

I loved this :)

Jon Cromwell said...

I really enjoyed this Steve, most entertaining to read and a truly fine Troy Story Epilogue poem. Having read some of the earlier comments I couldn't resist suggesting Russell Crowe for Menelaus and Olga Kurylenko as Helen (if you've seen The Water Diviner you'll understand why). Thanks for sharing. I hope your NW lockdown isn't pissing you off too much.

Jambo said...

Top draw that one!

Anonymous said...

Written with your usual panache, Mr R.

Georgia Steele said...

Really very good indeed. I love the poem and the logo!

Jacq Slater said...

Wonderfully told. 👍

Steve Rowland said...

Terry, I remember watching Michael Woods' TV documentary series back in the mid-1980s and somewhere I have his BBC book In Search Of The Trojan War.

Mitch Carragher said...

I enjoyed your slightly jocular approach to the Greek pantheon, akin to any extended human dynasty with their foibles - but then your poem was full of serious emotional impact and rather well done I thought. Kudos to you for a great blog.

Grant Trescothick said...

Fabulous blog Steve, hugely entertaining to read from your lowdown on the squabbling gods to that atmospheric poem with its mounting sense of tension. Troy Story VII logo is very clever too.

Bruce Sanderson said...

Ancient history doesn't stand still. I believe the latest thinking is that Troy VI was the one corresponding most closely to Homer's description and the war was probably closer to 1260 BC than 1190 BC. I enjoyed the premise and the execution of your poem, very good.

Tony Rutherford said...

Really enjoyed that!