written and posted by members of Lancashire Dead Good Poets' Society

Saturday 14 August 2021

Stress In The City

I've found myself in a very unusual situation this evening, of trying to write a blog while being overtaken by the very events I'm writing about, and it's proving hard to keep up. If we, in what I'll loosely term the western democracies, think we have  stress  in our lives, we should be thankful we don't live in one of the world's crisis hot spots - Myanmar, Somalia, Syria, Yemen... or Afghanistan, scene of the latest unfolding humanitarian disaster. 

One of Donald Trump's many crass and insular decisions (as he looked to boost his chances of getting elected for a second term as the worst president of the USA), was his commitment to pull all American forces out of Afghanistan by mid-2021, a policy that his successor has been unwilling to reverse. We are seeing the consequences of that policy for the Afghan people right now, as the Taliban roll over town after town and province after province and the citizens from those areas flee in their thousands to the capital Kabul. Imagine the stress in that city right now and the absolute stomach-churning dread of what is going to befall millions of decent, ordinary Afghans, particularly women and girls, as the oppression of a hard-line fundamentalist Islamic rule takes hold once again. The US (and Britain in its wake) knew what the consequences would be. They just didn't expect them to come so swiftly. Only a month ago Biden was ridiculing the notion that the Taliban could ever come to power again.  Even this morning the White House was predicting Kabul might not fall for weeks yet. Right now it looks like it will succumb before the week-end is done.

Of course, Afghanistan is already an Islamic republic, but for two decades it has been a relatively enlightened one in which democratic principles have been respected and the hard-won rights of women to education and employment have been upheld, ever since the allies agreed (in the aftermath of 9/11) to wage war on the Taliban and the militant fundamental groups like Al Qaeda that the Taliban gave protection to. 

The US-led intervention was called 'Operation Enduring Freedom'. Ironically, when the allies moved into Afghanistan in 2001, the Taliban offered an unconditional surrender which the Americans rejected. Since then, the war on the one hand and the reconstruction/humanitarian effort on the other has cost many allied soldiers' lives and trillions of dollars and pounds. But the political will in the West was not there to sustain the gains, the Taliban continued to recruit and grow - current strength approximately 60,000 full-time fighters- funded by the heroin trade which they control (Afghanistan is the world's leading producer of opium), and now they've taken their chance as soon as they saw the allied commitment falter, effectively rendering the last twenty years in vain. Everything is about to change for the worse, the liberalisation and democratic advances are bound to to be rolled back and freedom will once more prove illusory. 

Consequently, millions of Afghans feel betrayed by the West, and who can blame them? They have become refugees in their own county, homeless, hungry, helpless and hopeless about the future.


Some, who have served the allied cause, will be evacuated for their own safety, along with most foreign nationals who are scrambling to quit the country before the Taliban regime is fully installed. Many will probably try to flee even beyond Kabul if it falls, across the border into Pakistan. There is a concern that female MPs, women's rights activists and professional women (doctors, teachers, lawyers, artists) will be targeted, possibly murdered, that schooling and university education for girls will be curtailed, that the progressive reforms of two decades will be swiftly reversed, for the Taliban despise educated girls and emancipated women.

I can anticipate hand-wringing from our leaders in the West, expressions of surprise that it has all ended like this, calls on the soon-to-be new Taliban government to respect the rights of women - and it will all be to no avail. I think there will be widespread horror and moral indignation from humanitarian organisations and from ordinary people, and a deep sadness and shock that Afghanistan has been abandoned in this way. But I bet the abiding concern of the governments in London and Washington will not be for the people of Afghanistan so much as a worry that the fundamentalist regime, when re-established  in Kabul, will once again be a safe haven and training ground for groups such as Al Qaeda in their holy war against the West.


I find it difficult to craft good poetry to short order, so this latest is a work-in-progress from a heavy heart (with a few nuanced changes thanks to input from my fellow poets in Blackpool & Fylde Stanza group). I nearly called it A Second Slavery Beckons and may not be complete....but then nor is the momentous event it seeks to recognise, as the Taliban poise to turn the clock back on twenty years of fragile but joyous emancipation.

Afghanistan
Afghanistan, the sun sets on you.
Dread spreads along your streets
and fear fills many female hearts,
for a second slavery beckons.

Husbands and fathers take care.
The well-trodden path to water*
is hard on wives and daughters,
for a second slavery beckons.

Homes stand deserted, hope fades,
thousands seek to flee their fate.
Lamp-posts wait on human fruit,
for a second slavery beckons.

Hide your baubles and your books,
your certificates and song-sheets,
dissemble maidens, if you can,
for a second slavery beckons.

The flowering of your womanhood
will wither soon, narcotic poppies
prove the only acceptable bloom,
for a second slavery beckons.

Can there be too high a price to pay
for trying to make a better world? 
Tonight in Kabul, the reckoning,
for a second slavery beckons.

*The literal meaning of Sharia is: the clear, well-trodden path to water.

As a musical bonus (before women are prohibited from singing in public in Afghanistan), here's Aryana Sayeed performing: Za Spina Jeli Yama (Just click on the title of the song to activate the link.)

Thanks for reading. Never undervalue our freedoms, S ;-)

62 comments:

Anonymous said...

The enormity of some events is just too hard to grasp, the implications just to difficult to verbalize - but I think you've done an excellent job there.

Ian Tallach said...

Thanks for sharing.

Miriam Fife said...

Absolutely heart-breaking to see what's overtaken Afghanistan in the last few days. The news footage is shocking, so many frightened people desperate to get out. :(

Ross Madden said...

Just well done Steve for putting so eloquently what many must be feeling today. 👏

otyikondo said...

Kipling - he of the cakes - was not specifically referring to Afghanistan or to the infamous "Great Game”, but his words are suitable nonetheless:
”And the end of the fight is a tombstone white with the name of the late deceased, and the epitaph drear, “A Fool lies here who tried to hustle the East.”
Many have tried to hustle Afghanistan, and not much good has it done them. Sadly, it is the locals who end up suffering most from our actions there. At least our lot (in Finland) have pledged to evacuate all the Afghans who helped us: interpreters and suchlike. How the hell they are going to do it is another matter...

Natalia Spencer said...

Thanks Steve. This really did need sharing here. The thought that Afghanistan will revert back to a training camp is very unsettling. I feel for the woman who will be evermore invisible & subjugated to all manner of oppression.

Nicole Barkhuizen said...

Very worrying and incredibly sad.

Nigella D said...

You always write with such candour and compassion. Your poem might not be finished, but it is very affecting as it stands. Well done (as others have said).

Saskia Parker said...

Steve you have to stop making us cry! 😥

Brett Cooper said...

You have to feel sorry for 'ordinary' Afghans. That country has been in turmoil for the last 50 years, ever since it deposed its king in 1973 and tried to become a modern democracy. Within five years there was a Marxist revolution, then a civil war in which the Russians got embroiled (and 6 million Afghans fled the country) and then another civil war after the Russian troops left before the arrival of militant Islam and the rise of the Taliban in the late 1990s and the US-led invasion of 2001. The place has been hell on earth and millions more are set to flee now, as your blog documents. Who knows what the answer is!

Gemma Gray said...

Well done Steve. Having read your blog and all subsequent comments, I can only echo your words about how thankful we should be that we live where we do. For all its faults, the west is best (and I'm not being smug). Your poem (even in its unfinished state) is most poignant.

Anonymous said...

"Lamp-posts wait on human fruit"... is that hanging people? Awful, barbaric if so.

Aishaa said...

Thank you. 🖤❤️💚

Mac Southey said...

Informative albeit depressing reading. Obviously we all hope Taliban II will not roll back the freedom that women have acquired in Afghan society since Taliban I were toppled, but the concerns are all there and legitimately so, as your powerful poem forewarns.

Kevin Sterling said...

Excellent post, so well articulated. Good poem too. 👍

Phil Drabble said...

I read an article today (I think it was the Guardian) explaining that the timing of the withdrawal on the anniversary of 9/11 also coincided with the peak of the 'fighting season' when all the Taliban front line fighters/farmers are available for service. 😔

Deke Hughes said...

Concise summary of the West's dereliction of duty. Expect the worst (despite any promises the Taliban might make). Your poem's use of a refrain is very powerful.

Caroline Asher said...

Stressed enough to risk life and limb. Shocking events unfolding. Fear for Afghanistan, especially its women.

Dani Merakli said...

It needed to be said, Steve. Your poem evokes the danger well. Hard times ahead, regrettably.

Steve Rowland said...

I had some discussion with fellow poets last night about the refrain "a second slavery beckons". Some thought it misleading as there have been many instances of slavery around the world across the centuries. I'm leaving it as it is because I think it's reasonable to infer from the poem and the general state of knowledge about Afghanistan that the rise to power of the Taliban in 1996 inflicted the first slavery on that country's women (revoking their rights, reducing their status) and the re-emergence of the Taliban is going to see the imposition of a second such subjugation.

Luke Taylor said...

A good post and a moving poem. 👏

Adele said...

Thnak you for this Steve. The events of the past week were. in my opinion, inevitable. I always believed that the Taliban would return to Afghanistan and that the Afghan army would either flip sides or run. Your poem is woderful and I particularly loved the 'flowering womanhood'not just ine relatn to the women of the country but of Afghanistan itself. I pray thet the new regime allow them to continue in education. Perhaps they will realise that woemn can make a valuabe conrtibution to national prosperity and wellbeing.

Samina Chander said...

Well done for the analysis and the poem... and the musical bonus. All powerful and deserving of a wide audience. Thank you.

Tom Shaw said...

Like many of my fellow Americans I feel angry and saddened by what has happened in Afghanistan in recent weeks. Biden has not handled this well but as you said in your blog this was a legacy of Trump's disastrous foreign policy. I don't know what the guy was thinking. Well done for the poem. I hope it's not the day the music died for Afghan musicians.

Seb Politov said...

Great blog full of justified anger and concern - "a second slavery beckons" is a chilling refrain. Moral dereliction by the West in my eyes too.

Flloydwith2Ells said...

You've summarised the current situation with your customary clarity and passion, Steve, while the poem expresses our deepest fears. I do think it's important to remember that the past 20 years saw a very dodgy show of democracy, with rampant corruption and incompetence that was largely ignored and papered over by successive US and UK governments, and the UN. I know people who worked there, who love the people, but despaired for them all along. This current disastrous situation has been 20 years in the making, as you imply.

Rod Downey said...

Spot on Steve and an excellent poem. Once Trump did his deal, it was inevitable really that it would all end in chaos and that many of those Afghans who were part of the 20-year democratization will be left behind at the questionable mercy of the Taliban.

Robbie Whittaker said...

Very elegant that Steve. The analogy about lampposts and fruit made me shudder a little.

Cynthia said...

Afghanistan has occupied my thoughts this week as it must have most caring people's and I thought I would reply to your blog more fully than a post.

It is the speed of the take over and lack of preparedness by USA and UK govts that is so shocking. With all our sophisticated information channels why wasn't their more awareness of the Taliban's capability in moving in and why didn't Biden set up a peace keeping force?

They are pretending to be more Liberal and making a show of this as the Nazis did in one of the concentration camps, I think in Czechoslovakia whilst their horrors were unseen. I remember visiting a centre in Prague where children's paintings had the date of birth and an unknown date of death.

What makes a terrible situation worse in Afghanistan is that they have tasted a better life, freedoms, education etc and to have known that and have it taken away is heartbreaking. The thought of women living alone
without protection waiting for anything to befall them. The sight of that little group in Kabul, holding up signs and risking their lives in doing so...

Of course we must do all we can but there is the unpleasant fact that some embryo terrorists could sneak in undercover to this country, as someone said last night terrorists are everywhere now. Meanwhile we must offer
what we are best at...sanctuary.

I think there will be an outpouring of Afghanistan poems, there are many different aspects but to do them justice is another thing. Each incident deserves its own poem but I will wait to see what to focus on. I hope you are well and great to see people again on Wednesday.

CI66Y said...

Another potent piece, Steve. It is a horrible feeling, much like we felt for the failed Prague Spring of 68, the coup in Chile and more recently the crushing of popular uprisings in Syria and Belarus. We are powerless and our governments are complicit in the disaster. You did well with your Afghanistan poem. As another has commented, I'm sure we will see many like-minded responses in the next few weeks.

Lizzie Fentiman said...

Well said. A clear yet compassionate assessment of this terrible betrayal of the Afghan people and a powerful poetic statement of the impending horror, for I cannot believe the Taliban will be different second time around.

Anne Gaelan said...

Many thanks for this.

Jill Reidy said...

Excellent blog ❤️x

Jen McDonagh said...

Thank you Steve. You give us the words when we are at a loss to find them ourselves.

Harry Lennon said...

As cogently written an indictment of our betrayal of Afghanistan as I've read; plus your poem is a powerful thing (and I like the echo of DH Lawrence's The Evening Land in your opening line). Well done (to short order)! 👏

Olwyn Morgan said...

Very sad to see the scenes from Kabul today. Your blog is a great piece and that poem, though portentously sad, is brilliantly done.

Jon Cromwell said...

Yes, exactly Steve. Our governments are bastards. I don't like Blair but I think he's right about this debacle.

Mary Jane Evans said...

Someone once said something along the lines of 'a civilisation can be measured by how well its women are treated'. We are watching you, Taliban!

Anonymous said...

Powerful poetry.

Bridget Durkin said...

Afghanistan, what a betrayal by the west. I thought your blog was very well written, the poetry is powerful and the musical bonus is interesting. Unhappy days lie ahead.

Kenny Garcia said...

Apparently its mountains hold huge lithium reserves. Someone is going to get wealthy by mining that lot - Chinese or Russian companies is my guess. Let's see who recognises and offers aid to the new government first.

Marie Hinton said...

Apparently many people (not just women) have been hiding for months from Taliban targetted attacks. I fear the Taliban will be ruthless in victory despite what they say publicly. Very good blog Steve and a powerful poetic reaction to impending loss of freedoms for millions of Afghans. I fear for those girls in particular.

Josh Lonsdale said...

Fantastic article and poem, Steve. I love the lines ‘Lamp-posts wait on human fruit’ ! Can I pick your brain on the meaning behind it?

Unknown said...

Put onto words so many of my thoughts and so very poignant. You have set a very high bar...

Dan Francisco said...

As an American, I feel anger and shame about my country's handling of the whole Afghanistan affair. Sure our original intervention was colored by 9/11 and countering fanatical jihadists but as your blog points out we made errors from the get go and now this messy exit which feels like a betrayal of a people.

Anonymous said...

Excellent blog Steve. Your poem packs a real emotional punch as well. I watched a Horizon programme earlier in the week - heart-breaking to see how it's all unravelled and as for the Taliban the claim that they've just become more savvy at lying to the world has a ring of truth (especially as they have been trying to kill journalists via car bombs and ambushes for the last couple of years. One week to go to get people most at risk out of the country. Why wasn't that simple task better planned? Shame on the USA and UK.

Fawzia Yari said...

Life in fear for my friends who are there. 🖤

K0NR&D said...

Top blogging and one hell of a poem. 👏

Brizette Lempro said...

So sad seeing all the suffering and desparation. I think your poem is brilliant.

Lois Hayburn said...

And now they are blowing up innocent men, women and children. Horrendous. Thank you for sharing your thoughts and poetry on this terrible occurrence.

Natalija Drozdova said...

Hope it's okay to cut and paste this report from the BBC's John Simpson yesterday:

"Everything is uncertain now in Afghanistan. Schools and colleges where girls were getting a good education have virtually all closed down. Reports from across the country say that women are scarcely to be seen in the streets now, just as happened when the Taliban were last in power, from 1996 to 2001.

"There are frequent reports of local atrocities: the murder of the folk-singer Fawad Andarabi in Baghlan province, for instance. Afghanistan's towns and cities have echoed to music for 20 years. Now it has been banned by the Taliban."

Who wouldn't want to leave if they could?

Tim Devonshire said...

Very well said Steve. If only words could make a difference... :-(

Emily Blythe said...

Such a powerful blog for such a devastating event.

Anonymous said...

Brilliant but bleak poetry. What an awful human catasrtophe.

Lesley Harrison said...

Very moving, Steve. Brilliant writing.

Anonymous said...

220 Afghan refugees to be put up at the Metropole in Blackpool. Local Tory MPs protesting vigorously.

James King said...

I listened to you read your poem last night, such a powerful piece and that refrain like a funeral bell tolling. Brilliant. 👏

Bella Jane Barclay said...

Already announced they're going to segregate universities by gender and make all female students adopt strict sharia dress code.

Brian Cassell said...

Women who had jobs are being told they are no longer allowed to work, a desperate situation if they are the main breadwinner. Starvation looms for them and their kids. The Taliban are medieval!

Hayden Hayden said...

A brilliant summary. Not only have the allies f*cked up and f*cked off, they've also cut off all aid to Afghanistan. There's a humanitarian disaster in the making and it won't be only women and girls who suffer. It's an appalling mess.

Florian Lowe said...

The executions have started but this time they are covert, not public, as the Taliban are trying to fool the world that they have changed.

Anonymous said...

I see the Taliban have sent a delegation to Moscow, so soon the Russians will be giving economic aid and exercising influence over Afghanistan. Well played America!