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Showing posts with label English. Show all posts
Showing posts with label English. Show all posts

Monday, 22 April 2013

Modern Language


Couple of weeks back at the last BDGPS meeting at the Cafe 5, I delivered a mini lecture about how to Shakespeare more interesting to the youth of today. I concluded the Iambic Pentameter was partially to blame. It makes the dialogue hard to master and turns the kids off, which is such a shame when the words themselves have so much meaning.

I also claimed that William was a 'punk', that he often did his own thing, wrote his own rules and famously, invented his own words. This last statement I used as evidence that it is academics who claim to be bastions of the English language that are stopping people from being interested in Shakespeare and that modern 'counter culture' which many refer to as 'chavs', 'goths' or 'emos' have more in common with the Bard than any of these professor types do.

The youth, with their slang terms and inarticulate grunts of communication are the ones tacking the language forward. By telling these social groups that they do not 'speak proper' Telling them to read Shakespeare so they can understand the English language is like telling them to stop listening to hip-hop and listen to Elvis Presley. Whatever your musical tastes, Elvis was at the start of the new movement that allowed Hip-Hip to be created, not a real reason for street beats not to exist.

William Shakespeare invented over 1700 new words in the English language. Some by changing the use from nouns into verbs and verb into adjectives. He put words together connecting them in ways never seen before. He added prefixes and suffixes, removed letters created completely new original words. And all because he wanted to make them fit, because he wanted to finish his work, because he, well, just wanted to.

So, our Will was a bit of rebel who just made things up to suit him and his art. Sounds like he should be a hero of the young and not as the graffiti once said about him, as a man who “wrote plays that were very boring”

Here are just a few of his creations:

academe, accused, addiction, advertising, amazement, arouse, assassination, backing, bandit, bedroom, beached, besmirch, birthplace, blanket, bloodstained, barefaced, blushing, bet, bump, buzzer, caked, cater, champion, circumstantial, cold, blooded, compromise, courtship, countless, critic, dauntless, dawn, deafening, discontent, dishearten, drugged, dwindle, epileptic, equivocal, elbow, excitement, exposure, eyeball, fashionable, fixture, flawed, frugal, generous, gloomy, gossip, green, eyed, gust, hint, hobnob, hurried, impede, impartial, invulnerable, jaded, label, lackluster, laughable, lonely, lower, luggage, lustrous, madcap, majestic, marketable, metamorphize, mimic, monumental, moonbeam, mountaineer, negotiate, noiseless, obscene, obsequiously, ode, olympian, outbreak, panders, pedant, premeditated, puking, radiance, rant, remorseless, savagery, scuffle, secure, skim milk, submerge, summit, swagger, torture, tranquil, undress, unreal, varied, vaulting, worthless, zany, gnarled, grovel

Tuesday, 7 August 2012

Ekphrastic? Search me - I'm just an English student.

Tango by Isabel Hermano

by Sheilagh Dyson

If there’s ever a word calculated to send me blinking and incredulous to the dictionary it’s ‘ekphrastic’. Even the spell check on my laptop throws it up as a spelling mistake. This last year has been a salutary one for me. I thought I knew a thing or two about the English language, oh yes, and had a pretty wide vocabulary. You weren’t going to catch me out with words I didn’t understand – it’s English, for goodness sake. A year on, ashen-faced and gibbering, I find I’ve had to learn a whole new language that I didn’t know existed. It’s as if I left school, fell asleep for half a century and awoke to an alien way of describing features of the language, my language.

My ignorance knew no bounds – I’ve had to learn to trot out synecdoche, metonymy, intertextuality, hyponymy, deixis, homophony, polysemy, neologism, exophoric, anaphoric, cataphoric and the like, as if I knew what I was talking about. And there was me thinking that ‘oxymoron’ would be as complicated as it would get!  We haven’t even ‘done’ ekphrastic yet, hence my rush to the Dictionary of Stylistics, as I so often have to do nowadays.

  But I digress…….so now I know. Ekphrasis, put simply, is the distillation into words of a piece of art or music. It can be in the form of poetry or prose. Is it even possible to accomplish, given that a painting, sculpture or photograph has an obvious immediate visual appeal? How can mere words come close to conveying the visual information, the beauty of an image? Or the emotion of a piece of music?

Judge for yourself. Here are two ekphrastic poems, one inspired by maybe the best known painting in the world, the other by a less well known painting, which was a birthday present from the artist to the poet. I think both beautifully reflect in words and capture the spirit of their respective inspirations.

La Giaconda by Michael Fields is an unusual interpretation of the famous and much speculated upon smile and demeanour of the Mona Lisa. She's mean! Michael Fields is the pseudonym of Katharine Bradley and Edith Cooper, an aunt and niece who lived together as lovers and collaborated in writing poetry. In the preface to their second poetry collection, Sight and Song, their intention was made clear. It was to ‘translate into verse what the lines and colours of certain chosen pictures sing in themselves; to express not so much what these pictures are to the poet, but rather what poetry they objectively incarnate.’


La Gioconda by Leonardo da Vinci
La Gioconda

Historic, side-long, implicating eyes;
A smile of velvet's lustre on the cheek;
Calm lips the smile leads upward; hand that lies
Glowing and soft, the patience in its rest
Of cruelty that waits and does not seek
For prey; a dusky forehead and a breast
Where twilight touches ripeness amorously:
Behind her, crystal rocks, a sea and skies
Of evanescent blue on cloud and creek;
Landscape that shines suppressive of its zest
For those vicissitudes by which men die.

Michael Fields

‘Drunken Tango on the Floor’ by Karima Hoisan is an exuberant response to a painting entitled ‘Tango’ given to her by the artist, Isabel Hermano. Isabel's painting was inspired both by seeing a couple dancing a ‘perfect and almost out of control tango that cleared the dance floor until they were the only ones on it’ and by the classical tango music of Astor Piazzolla.

Drunken Tango on the Floor

Inspired by the painting “Tango” by Isabel Hermano
For Isabel Hermano the artist
Their colored inks were spilled not poured
as they danced three long- steps across a tiled floor.
Those tango winds rippled the accordion,
arm dropping
to a dip,
he left teeth marks upon her wrist,
wild eyed,
he grabbed a stolen kiss
Then she was just a drunken ripped tornado
that descended into a deep and purple haze
stirred into fruity caramel and sprinkled with nut glaze.
He danced her heels over headdress
then reeled her in so extra tight,
there was not a doubt she was liquid on love
and would turn into a two-four- one step-puddle
at his feet,
before the clock struck midnight.
It was when the cold and hot of him and her
met across a room,
and tangled in a tango
that melted legs off the piano
incinerating the vinyl table tops.
They became another pair of drunken lovers
scuffing up the floor,
he twirled her and over-wound her,
barred the windows and the doors.
They were free-forming into toffee,
tossing all caution to the whores.
He could have melted that city down,
before their dance was on its second round,
while all the other ladies paled on sight.
She was a supernatural-counter-clockwise-thing,
held only to the ground by perfect timing,
taut arms, and a tightly, tethered lead-string.
They stumbled in and out of grace,
her fast breath gently blowing through his face,
hips matched in perfect sync,
the patrons mute and slack-jawed in silk and lace.
There was not an inch of room for all the rest…
so they cleared out to the bar instead,
like a twister through tornado alley,
her hot spot riding up his leg.
They were frosting on the dance floor,
spreading out to cover more,
if you’d lit a match they’d have lit on fire,
ninety- proof of alcoholic love,
calves and pelvis riding on a two-backed dancing storm
descending from the nimbus clouds above.
Flames of flamboyant dance moves,
she was his bull and he rode her in red,
there was not an inch of room for other couples,
so they cleared the bar and fled.
He snapped his cape, and cracked his whip,
until she full-out bent her knee,
as he pressed her tighter to his will,
for the tango-dancing world to see.
It was when the cold and hot
of him and her
met across a room and tangled in a tango,
that melted legs off the piano,
incinerating the vinyl table tops.
They became another pair of drunken lovers
scuffing up the floor
he twirled her and over-wound her,
barred the windows and the doors.
He danced her heels over headdress
then reeled her in so tight,
there was not a doubt she was drunk on love
and would turn into a two-four-one-step puddle
at his feet,
before the clock struck midnight.
Karima Hoisan

Ektastic!!

Tuesday, 3 January 2012

A Slice of Poetry Pie

07:02:00 Posted by Lara Clayton , , , , , , , 3 comments
Evie the Cow from Poetry Pie
There is a single word that causes me to grimace. It is capable of creating a similar reaction to the one that results when Shaun opens a bottle of beer with his teeth. 

Closed eyes. Tense and shrugged shoulders. A sharp inhale of breath.

My two-year-old nephew hunts for the TV remote while chanting, "Beebies, Lala. Beebies, Lala. Beebies, Lala." I feel myself wanting to curl into foetal position at the mere mention of the children's TV channel, and on the rare occasion when I've given into Josh's demands, I've decided that colliding with a brick wall would probably cause less pain.

However, a few weeks ago the insanity-inducing channel redeemed itself (slightly)...  And surprisingly, CBeebies' saving grace was poetry.

Yes, initially I was worried, concerned, fearful and panicky. But then I noted a name that soothed like a Radox bubble bath, Roger McGough.

"Poetry Pie vividly brings to life the incredible poems of well-known contemporary poets specially written for CBeebies, with an animated cast of creatures who act, dance and sing the words of the poems." (Source, BBC.)  
Each episode of poetry pie is kept short (about 3 minutes) which allows young children to remain focused and entertained. The bright colours, music and fun characters work well with the nonsensical verses. But, quite importantly, it doesn't make me want to rip out my hair or prise my fingernails off with a pair of pliers. However, the best thing about Poetry Pie is that it shows that language can be fun. It introduces children to English in an exciting and creative way, and confidently says, "Poetry is not outdated".

Poetry Pie, Episode 01 - WATCH 

Thank you for reading,
Lar