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Showing posts with label sonnet. Show all posts
Showing posts with label sonnet. Show all posts

Friday, 3 October 2014

A twist in the tale ....

There are times, aren't there, when things just don't turn out the way you expect them to?  This week, has been one such week. Jam packed with appointments and meetings, I thought (stupidly, as it turns out), that I knew exactly where I would be, what time I would be there, what would be discussed and what the outcome would be. Hmmmm, maybe not. There has been twist upon twist, shock and surprise (in a good way, thankfully).

So, running with the theme this week which is "twist", I remembered that sonnets are a poem which have a twist. Now, I've never written a sonnet before, and not having had much time to myself this week I have done a small amount of research and discovered that they are not only reserved for tales of love, but could be applied to writing about problems too. If I've been mis-informed, then please accept my sincerest apologies. Also, being as how I remember very little about my English lessons through High School (sorry teacher!), if I've got all this very wrong, then again, apologies most sincere.

Here's my first ever attempt at writing a basic sonnet; it's not clever, and is written in modern day speak, but here you go.


A surprising twist:

That day I got home from work rather nifty,
to find a man loitering in my back garden,
looking around furtive and shifty,
without explanation or begging my pardon.

So I demand: "Who the hell are you?"
"What is your purpose? Friend or Foe?"
"What were you going to do?"
"Do you really think I don't  know?".

"So, you think you are innocent?"
"You don't know what I mean?"
"Don't give me answers so insolent!"
"And what would you have done if you'd not been seen?"

The interrogation revealed that I had been wrong,
He was the planner for my surprise party all along.


Well, there you go. First ever attempt at a sonnet. I know it's not clever, I know it needs an awful lot of work, but at least that's the bones laid. Any helpful advice would be welcomed in the comments section below.

Have a great weekend folks and thanks for reading. ;-) x

Sunday, 28 April 2013

A Sonnet for England

This week on the Dead Good Blog we've been looking at the theme of Shakespeare- the man that coined a thousand phrases and has been hated by struggling schoolchildren countrywide ever since. It has been no coincidence- having been his official birthday last Monday and we've had a host of different angles on his legacy all week. 
Today, I want you to cast your mind back to the start of the week. It was a Monday, you probably went to work. Did you notice anything different? Any mention of it being Shakepeare's birthday? Any mention of St George's day? No, I didn't either. 

Sunday, 6 May 2012

Is NAPOWRIMO A Good Thing? Discuss.

07:30:00 Posted by Damp incendiary device , , , , , , 3 comments
by David Riley

It's certainly a challenge, having to write a poem every day for a month. It could be any sort of poem but I decided when I joined in I would do all mine with 14 lines. This means I didn't use the prompts thst appeared on the NAPO site periodically, giving suggestions as to a form to use if you were stuck for ideas. Oh no, not me. I was much stronger than this. Juts manly jaw.

Plus I had a plan so cunning you could stick a tail on it and easily mistake it for Reynard. I'd come across a writing exercise which suggested using other poems as inspiration for your own in a particular way. That'll do then. Sorted. I just needed 30, 14 line poems and Robert is your mother's brother.

That was the theory and it worked. For a bit. Then I started to scrat around for suitably inspiring stuff (doing this hand to mouth, as it were, makes it trickier than I thought it would be). Plus I wanted to do stuff of my own, without the need for this method. It was do-able and it was done...but...

This became a bit of a treadmill. There was no time to revise poems among other things. Also, I tend to write poetry in a very narrative style and need to practise changing that, which NAPOWRIMO didn't give me the chance to do; it was a matter of finish something and add it to the blog. Overall I suppose I'm fairly happy with 10% of what I put up there and they can be revisited and reworked. The rest might form something, eventually.

Would I do it again? It was good to join in with others and suffer together. As for developing as a poet? I don't think so. I need to work on certain things and this didn't allow that, so on balance, fun but not very useful.