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Showing posts with label Raven. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Raven. Show all posts

Thursday, 10 October 2013

Being Human

08:00:00 Posted by Damp incendiary device , , , , 3 comments
It seems only right that I asked my daughter, Raven, to join me on the blog this week.  She memorised the eponymous poem some time ago but most of it has now been replaced in her head by less useful material such as the periodic table, quotes from Supernatural and unforgettable scenes from fanfiction.  Personally, I think if your name is Poe you're going to write poetry.  Likewise, if your name is Raven you're going to rave, or make a lot of noise, or scare sickly writers.  Something like that.

Raven decided to honour 'he of the macabre symbol' with this poem:

Poe

Edgar Allen Poe quoth the word nevermore
Eighty five years before the Second World War
Wed his sickly cousin, who was only thirteen
Then killed off his players like young Usher Madeline.
Renowned world wide as an author workaholic
But also for his tenancy as demon alcoholic.
His image is iconic, as is his facial fur
His hands were always busy with ink or liqueur.
Til his untimely demise put a stop to his quill
Discovered in the early hours of Boston's autumn chill.


And from the words of a long dead poet inspiring a young, new poet to a very short review of something equally wonderful.  Last night David Riley and I drove to Manchester University to see the staging of Neil Astley's incredibly popular poetry collection, Being Human.  Three players took to an economical set to perform a selection of poems from the anthology.  If you want to read what the audiences and critics have said, go here. I don't think the praise goes far enough.  David and I are ruined for poetic performances for the foreseeable future.  Je ne regrette rien.

Being Human: Poetry in Performance is like a concentration of every momentous life event from birth to death, wrapped up in all those quiet moments, the shrieks and the murmurs.  It pulls in love and war, fear and hope and it reminds at every moment what it is to be human, to share this experience of living.  These powerful, rich, poignant, careful poems are embodied by the players so that the emotions are raw and close.  I cried several times.  I cried out of sadness, at the futility of war and harm, I cried at the beauty of the human condition, at the depth of loss and at the empathy which reminds us that we are the same for all our differences.  More than anything else, this performance nourished me to my core.  I can still feel its warmth at my centre.

Put simply, I cannot recommend this highly enough.  This is exactly what poetry in performance should do.  Every word was clear and every image delivered with a simple honesty.  I can honestly say I understood every poem.  One piece, an excerpt from Turkish Poet Edip Cansever's Table, was performed several times with a different emphasis on each occasion.  The poem is about life and what we choose to put on our table.  By performing it with a positive slant, then with an angry attitude and finally as a group performance, an extra dimension was added to that poem which neatly summed up the idea that life is what you make of it.  Both David and I were moved by Doris Kareva's poem, Shape of Time, and its hopeful message of unity.  There wasn't a dull moment in the hour long event.

If you want to see how powerful poetry is.  If you want to know how poetry must be performed.  If you want to know what binds us and why we need each other.  If you are breathing.  You must see this performance.  You'll have to travel a bit further to catch it next but trust me on this, it is absolutely worth the journey. 

Monday, 12 August 2013

My Family of Familiars

My Family of Familiars

So Mouse said it is fine,
And Cat agreed the line.
Yet Dog was not so keen,
For Rabbit to make a scene.
So Frog made for the road,
While the others all blamed Toad.
And Hamster chewed her seeds,
Sitting on Chicken's knee.
As Newt gave all the eye,
The large Raven flew on by.
Leaving Snake upon the ground,
With the Spiders running round.

“STOP!” cried the Witch,
“For I've had enough of this”

And she put the Spiders in their web,
Picked up Snake by his head.
Called Raven to it's perch,
Placed Newt on a bookshelf verge.
Took Chicken out to the Coop,
Put Hamster with her group.
Told Toad not to roam,
Then made Frog go back home.
She pushed Rabbit into her hutch,
Sent Dog to bed with slightest touch.
Insisted that Cat slept by the broom,
Ordered Mouse back to her room.

“That's better” said the Witch, looking in the mirror,

“Good night to everyone of you, my trust familiars”

Thursday, 22 November 2012

Emily Davison and the king's horse

13:00:00 Posted by Damp incendiary device , , , , , 3 comments

Picture a girl. She's in her teens. Every day brings a fresh horror of chemical storms. Five days each week she travels to her battleground. The law enforces this.

Every way the girl turns she sees missiles cruising, not aimed at her specifically but often they hit home.

Propaganda is just as dangerous. Ideas repeated over and over would trap her in a tiny cage. All it takes is for her to stop fighting, to stop eating and shorten her skirt, smile and keep her mouth shut.

But this girl is a soldier, trained by me since the day she was born to fight. Every day she wakes to the sound of those missiles and I make her breakfast while we talk tactics. In the evenings we tackle the propaganda while disseminating the day's battle.

There will be no peace. Not in my lifetime. Perhaps, if she fights well, she will find some for herself.

My daughter is a soldier. She is my pride and joy.

Thursday, 13 September 2012

Is that a Zanpakuto in your pocket?


Let me introduce you to Shounen Manga.  It's a category of the Japanese comic strips which centres on action, fighting and martial arts.  Examples include Bleach, Dragon Ball Z, Pandora Hearts and Kuroshitsuji.  It also happens to be the category of Manga which most interests my daughter, hence my meagre knowledge of the genre. 

Following on from Lara's fascinating post on onomatopoeia yesterday, I can confirm that the copy of Bleach (#45 if you are interested) which Raven left on the desk contains 5 instances of the word 'whup' on the first page.  This is the noise of a Zanpakuto, or fancy sword as I insist on calling them.  The fact that the book begins with the sound of a sword being swung does not surprise me.  From what I can gather, these comic strips are 85% fancy fighting and only 15% dialogue/plot development. 

There's a certain amount of fetishistic pleasure, I imagine, in looking at images of carefully orchestrated, supernatural, martial arts fights.  I have to imagine because to me this main element is about as exciting as an  Audi showroom, the Wickes catalogue, or the back page of the Gazette.  In short, the Shounen Manga is primarily aimed at the young uns with the dangly bits rather than the young uns with the monthly waterworks.  Which is why my daughter's continuing interest in the genre is so surprising.  She has introduced the series to several, female, friends and they too are hooked. 

The narrative arcs are sloth-like.  A single fight can be spread across several books, interspersed only by, somewhat witty, dialogue which often provides background to characters and the occasional flashback.  Characters wax lyrical about their extraordinary prowess with their weapon, describing the fight as it occurs.  And here is the point where I concede a similarity to poetry.  Japanese poetry tends to work on a deep, naturalistic level. In traditional Haiku, the focus is on capturing nature in concise, beautiful language, as in this example by 17th century poet, Matsuo Basho:

on a bare branch
a crow settles down
autumn dusk


This makes me wonder, if the focus is on examining the movement and action in Shounen Manga, in close detail, what does the language of the characters look like, if taken away from the images?  Below are 2 examples of dialogue taken from the Bleach issue mentioned above. 

Tosen...
You said before the battle that you knew we'd eventually cross swords.
To tell you the truth...
I was thinking the same thing as we fought.
I suppose Hisagi was too.
Our relationship has been superficial until now.
We were destined...
To cross swords one day...
And to truly get to know one another.

Don't seek aesthetics in battle.
Don't seek virtue in death.
Don't think your life belongs only to yourself.
If you really want to protect something...
Attack the enemy from behind.


It's certainly not an attempt at natural dialogue.  The characters are, to my mind, more like conduits for a variety of martial arts philosophies.  The text reminds me of Confucian proverbs, I-Ching definitions or Sun Tzu's Art of War which places the style within a broader cultural context. 

Repetition is used to great extent, not only in the prolonged battles of Shounen Manga but in the dialogue, as above.  The ellipsis is used to break up text across frames but serves as a line break would on a page of poetry.  The first section above is immediately thought-provoking and the second has a little more depth to it.  Both can be read on a level beyond that of the immediate meaning: Can we really say we know someone if we've never crossed them?  Do we place more value on our individual life or that of our society? 

Personally I find it challenging to sit through entire episodes of Shounen Anime on DVD, nevermind reading an entire comic book of the stuff.  My addiction to a fast-paced plot and lack of interest in anything to do with fighting means they lack appeal for me.  But I am beginning to understand that there is a beauty in the form.  If flashy swords and deep philosophy are your cup of tea, why not look up the enormous wealth of Manga available and see if any of it works for you.